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The One with Justin Kuritzkes

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December 3, 2024 Scriptnotes

John welcomes playwright, novelist and screenwriter Justin Kuritzkes to discuss having his first two movies — Challengers and Queer — produced a single year.

After charting his journey from playwright to screenwriter, we compare two drafts of Challengers to look at how the story changed during a hasty development, including crafting that iconic three-way. We also explore adapting William S. Burroughs’ novel Queer, and the film’s approach to showing sex on screen.

In our bonus segment for premium members, Justin looks back on his time as a viral YouTube potion seller, and the value of that creative outlet early in his career.

Links:

  • Justin Kuritzkes on Instagram and YouTube
  • Challengers and Queer
  • Justin’s novel, Famous People
  • Challengers – Production Draft
  • Challengers – First Draft
  • Queer by William S. Burroughs
  • Potion Seller
  • 3000 Miles to Graceland
  • Why does my sign look like it has been burned? by Perth Graphics Centre
  • Know Your Enemy podcast
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  • Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
  • John August on Threads, Instagram, Twitter and Mastodon
  • Outro by Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 12-4-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Conflict and Stakes Compendium

August 20, 2024 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

In this compendium episode, John and Craig look at two of the most fundamental building blocks of compelling stories – conflict and stakes.

We define six forms of conflict common in movies, and explore ways to sustain conflict within a scene and throughout a story. We also look for ways to find the root of your character’s stakes, pick the right stakes for the world around them, and the importance of making everything personal.

In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig look at Whiplash and how it finds conflict at the perfect tempo.

Links:

  • John’s Video Game Job Posting
  • Episode 179 – The Conflict Episode
  • Episode 402 – How Do You Like Your Stakes?
  • Snowpiercer – Left or Right by Every Frame a Painting on YouTube
  • Star Trek: The Next Generation In 40 Hours by Max Temkin
  • Harris’ or Harris’s? Apostrophe row divides grammar nerds from The Guardian
  • The Heights Deli & Bottle Shop
  • Cheerios Veggie Blends
  • Special K Zero
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Check out the Inneresting Newsletter
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
  • John August on Threads, Instagram, Twitter and Mastodon
  • Outro by Tim Brown (send us yours!)
  • Segments originally produced by Stuart Friedel and Megana Rao. Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 10-21-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

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