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Is the Slamdance script competition a bad idea?

November 10, 2006 Film Industry, Genres, QandA, The Nines

questionmarkI am a writer who has multiple scripts entered in the Slamdance Horror Script Competition.

Recently, Slamdance announced the new Grand Prize: $10,000 and acquisition of all rights and title by an independent production company. In said acquisition, the production company plans to produce a feature motion picture from the grand-prize winning script.

The winner will be paid five percent of the film’s minimum budget, which is $200,000.

So here’s my first question: Shouldn’t the writer be paid 10% of the film’s budget according to WGA standards?

As a writer who has primarily entered the competition with the hope of placing in the competition so I can attract queries from agents, I am a bit puzzled by this new Grand Prize. If a script is good enough to rise to the top of a competition like this, and if the writer is lucky enough to land a good agent, wouldn’t it be within the writer’s interest to look for a better deal?

Not to mention that upon accepting the Grand Prize and putting pen to paper, the writer is signing all rights of the script to the powers that be.

Would it be foolish for someone to decline the Grand Prize and take his or her chances with attracting an agent who might be able to find a better deal?

— Terrell
Newnan, Georgia

Yes, it would be foolish. If you win, you should take the prize money and the additional $10,000. (I’m assuming that the 10% of the budget comes on top of the prize money, but either way, take the deal.)

Why am I suggesting you blindly take whatever’s offered, when just two days ago I advised another reader to quickly get another lawyer? Because you live in Georgia. You’re treating the Slamdance competition as a sort of become-a-screenwriter lottery. The first, unspoken rule of lotteries is “always take the money.”

Could winning the competition help get you started as an honest-to-goodness screenwriter? Sure. But getting a movie made would be a much, much bigger help. Lots of writers win competitions but never get beyond that point. However, if you get a movie made — if you get a movie set up — you suddenly become an actual, working screenwriter. And the process of finding agents, managers and future work becomes much easier.

Now that your main question is resolved, let’s correct one fundamental misunderstanding:

Shouldn’t the writer be paid 10% of the film’s budget according
to WGA standards?

Yes, in Fantasyland. There’s no WGA rule or standard. All there is is WGA scale, which indicates the minimum a writer can be paid for movies of a certain budget. These are flat figures, not percentages. (You can download a .pdf of the rates here.)

I’ve never been paid anything close to 10% of a film’s budget. My first feature, Go, cost roughly $6 million. I was paid $70,000. That’s half a million dollars less than I “should” have gotten.

For The Movie, I was paid low-budget scale — $35,782, plus a $5,000 script publication fee. (If we’d qualified for the WGA Indie rates, we could have brought that down to zero.)

And as a writer who’s written several very expensive movies, let me tell you, I’d love to be cashing $20 million checks. But it doesn’t happen.

Don’t get me wrong, a screenwriter can make plenty of money. But dollar signs shouldn’t be a driving force in choosing it as a career, no matter what level you’re talking about.

Final Draft serves left-overs

November 5, 2006 Software

This afternoon, I opened up a recently-created Final Draft script in TextMate, to see how easily I could pull out the text. As one would expect, there was a lot of incomprehensible goobledygook. But there was also a surprising amount of detritus left over from previous projects — notably Big Fish.

It’s a little troubling that words and phrases from projects more than five years old are still showing up in new script files. My hunch is that it has something to do with the spell-checker, since these are unusual words (or August-isms) that the program might have flagged.

I’ve cleaned up the formatting, but these are the words:

  1. CROSSFADE
  2. Mmm
  3. Enchanté
  4. Buick
  5. Jesus-down-at-the-carwash
  6. Pinnochio?
  7. Frankensteinian
  8. lawnmowers
  9. nightstand
  10. WHIRR
  11. co-signed
  12. Gainsville
  13. handbrake
  14. Rockwell-esque
  15. SQUISHING
  16. AP
  17. payphone
  18. Hmm
  19. notepad
  20. Oldsmobile
  21. Calloway
  22. GRAVESIDE
  23. WINSLOW
  24. Grampa’s
  25. Grampa?
  26. thataway
  27. Chevrolet
  28. Chevy
  29. missus
  30. Soggybottoms
  31. Winslow
  32. ya!
  33. Atari
  34. Hawkin’s
  35. uncatchable
  36. UNIV
  37. ça va?
  38. funeral-goers
  39. rainsoaked
  40. Allo oui?
  41. Crap
  42. Uh-huh
  43. chemo
  44. babysitting
  45. treehouse
  46. TREEHOUSE
  47. gonna
  48. crap
  49. twisty croc
  50. hafta
  51. wanna!
  52. Gimme
  53. unamused
  54. McHibbon
  55. IV
  56. ‘ssmooshing
  57. Johansen
  58. JOHANSEN
  59. POV
  60. ‘im!
  61. SHEPHARD
  62. ‘Cuz
  63. gotta
  64. improvin’
  65. hun’erd
  66. WINN-DIXIE
  67. checkstands
  68. WHIRRS
  69. Grampspopsicle
  70. FIREBREATHERS
  71. Soggybottom
  72. shit
  73. Hickville
  74. antsier
  75. Cadillac
  76. Samford
  77. babysit
  78. Skynard-loving
  79. pissed
  80. Unfazed
  81. ass-whupping
  82. FLASHFORWARD
  83. unshittable
  84. AHH! OHH!
  85. USO
  86. vampy

What’s more, this entire list showed up twice. Good job, Final Draft.

Depression on film

October 27, 2006 Genres, Psych 101

Steve Peterson points out you rarely see clinical depression in movies and TV. Which is odd, considering it’s much more common in real life than, say, retrograde amnesia.

What makes clinical depression un-cinematic is that it’s a negative affect: it’s characterized by a lack of motivation, a lack of action. Great writing can only do so much when you have a protagonist who doesn’t want to protagonate.

Shortbus has a clinically depressed character who goes off his meds — a decision that is as frustrating in a movie as it is in real life. While the character explains himself fairly well, he’s kind of a drag to be around. Again, realistic, but not particularly cinematic.

I Heart Shortbus

October 16, 2006 Rave

I saw and loved John Cameron Mitchell’s SHORTBUS over the weekend. I’ll spare a few hundred words of praise and say I pretty much agree with Moriarty’s review — though I’d hope my readers are a little less eww-gross-boys-kissing! than the average AICN commenter.

Mr. Mitchell and I used to eat lunch at the same Koo Koo Roo — yes, the notorious one — back when he was a bit player on the short-lived sitcom Party Girl. I want to claim that I knew him before Hedwig, but the truth is I only knew who he was. Important distinction.

Because it’s not rated, Shortbus probably won’t play in most markets.Which reminds me: Check out THIS FILM IS NOT YET RATED, a funny and interesting documentary by Kirby Dick about the MPAA ratings system. But that’s what DVDs are for.


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