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Intrinsic Motivation

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April 16, 2024 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig can’t help but look at intrinsic motivations — those specific internal drives that guide characters behavior. They discuss how to structure and expose that internal drive, the importance of an innate irritability, how it can stop your characters from becoming flat, and rewarding that intrinsic motivation with choice.

But first, we follow up on AI training, blueprints and “important” movies. We also weigh in on a high-school senior’s college dilemma and answer a listener question on writing with your trailer in mind.

In our bonus segment for premium members, John and Craig parse out their reasons for why humans may – or may not – ever leave the solar system.

Links:

  • My Pal Foot Foot by The Shaggs
  • Braid by Jonathan Blow
  • Connections from the New York Times
  • Q: Who Found a Way to Crack the U.K.’s Premier Quiz Show? by David Segal for The New York Times
  • On what motivates us: a detailed review of intrinsic v. extrinsic motivation by Laurel S. Morris, Mora M. Grehl, Sarah B. Rutter, Marishka Mehta, and Margaret L. Westwater
  • Why are there so many illegal weed stores in New York City? by PJ Vogt
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  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

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UPDATE 6-3-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Anti-Villains

March 7, 2023 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig twirl their mustaches and discuss what motivates our villains. Why does past trauma lead some characters to become villains, while others become heroes? What separates good and evil, and what makes a villain great?

We also celebrate Warren Beatty’s Dick Tracy TV special, and follow up on office phones, #PayUpHollywood, and American military influence in film.

In our bonus segment for premium members, we discuss Craig’s new tattoo of Ellie’s switchblade, and our first tattoo experiences.

Links:

  • Amtel Systems
  • The U.S. military’s Hollywood connection by Rebecca Keegan for Los Angeles Times
  • How E-girl influencers are trying to get Gen Z into the military by Günseli Yalcinkaya for DAZED
  • Warren Beatty Appears in Bizarre Dick Tracy TCM Special in Apparent Film-Rights Ploy by Dan Clarendon
  • The 1000 Deaths of Wile E. Coyote by T.B.D.
  • Why do good people do bad things? by Daniel Effron
  • Why some people are willing to challenge behavior they see as wrong despite personal risk by Catherine A. Sanderson
  • WGAw Late Pay Desk
  • The Puzzling Gap Between How Old You Are and How Old You Think You Are by Jennifer Senior for The Atlantic
  • Tattoo artist Yeono
  • Craig’s Tattoo
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Check out the Inneresting Newsletter
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  • Craig Mazin on Instagram
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  • John on Mastodon
  • Outro by Dilo Gold (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt with help from Chris Csont and edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 4-27-23: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

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