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Multi-Cam Comedies and WGA Dollars

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August 6, 2024 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John welcomes writer-director Betsy Thomas (Superior Donuts, Superstore) to finally discuss writing multi-camera sitcoms. Using famous sitcom scripts as guides, they look at how multi-cam sets itself apart through its unique formatting and production, how it utilizes blocking, its surprising limitations in post, and the live studio audience.

But Betsy is more than just a talented creative – she’s also the secretary-treasurer of the WGA West. Who better to lead us through the WGA annual report and look at writer income and residuals in the wake of the strike? We also follow up on gains for writing teams and un-locked pages, and answer listener questions on flashbacks, punctation, and untrustworthy producers.

In our bonus segment for premium members, Betsy explains to John and Megana what makes golf such a wonderful sport.

Links:

  • Betsy Thomas on Wikipedia and IMDb
  • Megana Rao on Twitter and IMDb
  • WGA West Annual Report
  • Writer Earnings Fell $600 Million Due to Strike and Industry Contraction, WGA Says by Gene Maddus for Variety
  • Cheers – “Give Me a Ring Sometime” by Glen and Les Charles
  • Cheers – “Father Knows Last”
  • Night Court – “Pilot” by Dan Rubin
  • Friends – “Pilot” by David Crane & Marta Kauffman
  • What My Adult Autism Diagnosis Finally Explained by Mary HK Choi for The Cut
  • Unstable – Season 2 on Netflix (hooray Megana Rao!)
  • Wicked Little Letters on Netflix
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Check out the Inneresting Newsletter
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
  • John August on Threads, Instagram, X and Mastodon
  • Outro by Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt, with help this week by Megana Rao. It is edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 10-7-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Featured Friday: Spies & Secret Agents

August 2, 2024 Apps, Weekend Read

Weekend Read, our app for reading scripts on your phone, features a new curated collection of screenplays each week.

This week, we enter the clandestine world of spies and secret agents to see how their writers use action, tension and character to keep us on the edge of our seats.

Our collection includes:

  • Argo by Chris Terrio
  • Bridge of Spies by Matt Charman and Ethan Coen & Joel Coen
  • Burn After Reading by Joel Coen & Ethan Coen
  • Charlie’s Angels by Ed Solomon & Ryan Rowe and John August
  • Hanna by Seth Lochhead and David Farr
  • Killing Eve – “Nice Face” by Phoebe Waller-Bridge
  • Kingsman: The Secret Service by Jane Goldman and Matthew Vaughn
  • Mission: Impossible by David Koepp and Robert Towne
  • Mission: Impossible – Fallout by Christopher McQuarrie
  • Mr. & Mrs. Smith – “First Date” by Donald Glover & Francesca Sloane
  • Skyfall by Neal Purvis, Robert Wade and John Logan
  • The Americans – “Pilot” by Joe Weisberg
  • The Bourne Identity by Tony Gilroy and William Blake Herron
  • The Debt by Matthew Vaughn & Jane Goldman and Peter Straughan
  • The Night Manager – “Episode 1” by David Farr
  • The Spy Who Dumped Me by Susanna Fogel & David Iserson
  • Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy by Bridget O’Connor & Peter Straughan
  • True Lies by James Cameron
  • Turn: Washington’s Spies – “Pilot” by Craig Silverstein & Mitchell Akselrad

Read these and other featured collections only on Weekend Read 2, available on all Mac and iOS devices. Download for free!

Rituals

July 30, 2024 Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig welcome back Megana Rao to look at rituals and what they can tell us about our characters. But what are characters doing deliberately, and what is just routine? They separate routines from rites, and how both can help deepen our understanding of characters and the threats that face them.

We also follow up on un-locking pages, industry software and health insurance for writing teams, before answering a listener question on transitioning from writing plays to writing movies.

In our bonus segment for premium members, John, Craig and Megana talk about coming-of-age rituals, and Craig reveals the theme of his Bar Mitzvah (it’s even nerdier than you think).

Links:

  • Standard Operating Procedures from Writer Emergency Pack
  • Long Island Compromise by Taffy Brodesser-Akner
  • Free AF non-alcoholic cocktails
  • Microsoft Re-Designs the iPod Packaging
  • Fantasmas on HBO/Max
  • AlphaBirds
  • Get a Scriptnotes T-shirt!
  • Check out the Inneresting Newsletter
  • Gift a Scriptnotes Subscription or treat yourself to a premium subscription!
  • Craig Mazin on Threads and Instagram
  • John August on Threads, Instagram, X and Mastodon
  • Outro by Nick Moore (send us yours!)
  • Scriptnotes is produced by Drew Marquardt with help this week by Megana Rao. It is edited by Matthew Chilelli.

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 10-7-24: The transcript for this episode can be found here.

Featured Friday: Emmy Nominees

July 26, 2024 Apps, Weekend Read

Weekend Read, our app for reading scripts on your phone, features a new curated collection of screenplays each week.

This week, we look at the series nominated across all categories at the upcoming 76th Emmy Awards. (In some cases, we’re using the pilot, so you don’t worry about spoilers for later seasons.)

Our collection includes:

  • 3 Body Problem – “Countdown” by David Benioff & D. B. Weiss & Alexander Woo
  • Abbott Elementary – “Pilot” by Quinta Brunson
  • All the Light We Cannot See – “Episode 1” by Steven Knight
  • Baby Reindeer – “Episode 1” by Richard Gadd
  • Curb Your Enthusiasm – “Funkhouser’s Crazy Sister” by Larry David
  • Fargo – “The Tragedy of the Commons” by Noah Hawley
  • Fellow Travelers – “You’re Wonderful” by Ron Nyswaner
  • Girls5eva – “Pilot” by Meredith Scardino
  • Griselda – “Paradise Lost” by Doug Miro and Giovanna Sarquis & Ingrid Escajeda
  • Hacks – “There Is No Line” by Lucia Aniello, Paul W. Downs and Jen Statsky
  • Lessons in Chemistry – “Introduction to Chemistry” by Lee Eisenberg
  • Mr. & Mrs. Smith – “A Break-Up” by Donald Glover & Francesca Sloane
  • Only Murders in the Building – “True Crime” by Steve Martin & John Hoffman
  • Palm Royale – “Maxine Goes to Palm Beach” by Abe Sylvia
  • Reservation Dogs – “Deer Lady” by Sterlin Harjo
  • Ripley – “I – A Hard Man to Find” by Steven Zaillian
  • Shōgun – “Anjin” by Rachel Kondo & Justin Marks
  • The Bear – “Fishes” by Christopher Storer & Joanna Calo
  • The Crown – “Sleep, Dearie Sleep” by Peter Morgan
  • The Gentlemen – “Refined Aggression” by Guy Ritchie & Matthew Read
  • The Morning Show – “In the Dark Night of the Soul It’s Always 3:30 in the Morning” by Kerry Ehrin and Jay Carson
  • The Other Two – “Pilot” by Chris Kelly & Sarah Schneider
  • The Righteous Gemstones – “Pilot” by Danny McBride
  • True Detective: Night Country – “Part 6” by Issa López
  • What We Do in the Shadows – “Pilot” by Jemaine Clement

Read these and other featured collections only on Weekend Read 2, available on all Mac and iOS devices. Download for free!

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