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Pitching Television, or Being a Passionate Widget

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December 5, 2017 Citizenship, Film Industry, Follow Up, Pitches, Resources, Scriptnotes, Television, Transcribed, WGA, Writing Process

John and Craig share their insight into pitching for television. How is it different that pitching features? How do express your passion for the project? How do you avoid being a Willy Loman pitching to a Willy Loman? (Sometimes you don’t.)

We also follow-up on the conversation about sexual harassment, with a focus on how men, bosses, and unions can work to make a safer, more comfortable workplace for everyone.

Reminder that the Scriptnotes Holiday Live Show is this Thursday in Hollywood. Ticket link below.

Links:

  • Holiday Live Show tickets are available.
  • A sexual harrassment resource guide from the WGA.
  • The Tangle Teezer hair brush as recommended on Kevin Kelly’s Cool Tools
  • Sleep Cycle Alarm Clock
  • Initial write ups/pitch documents for DC, The Circle (a.k.a. Alaska), and Ops.
  • The Scriptnotes Listeners’ Guide!
  • The USB drives!
  • John August on Twitter
  • Craig Mazin on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Find past episodes
  • Outro by Phil Baker (send us yours!)

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 12-13-17: The transcript of this episode can be found here

Mergers and Breakups

November 28, 2017 Film Industry, Los Angeles, Scriptnotes, Transcribed, Words on the page

John and Craig explore the possibilities and consequences of Disney’s potential purchase of Fox film and television studios. What might prevent the sale? What does each side stand to gain? To lose? What could it mean for writers?

Then, it’s another installment of “This Kind of Scene,” in which we dissect the mechanics of an effective breakup scene by looking at Casablanca, Forgetting Sarah Marshall, (500) Days of Summer, Love and Basketball, Brokeback Mountain and Breakfast at Tiffany’s.

The Scriptnotes live holiday show is December 7th in Hollywood, with special guest writer-producers Julie Plec (The Vampire Diaries), Michael Green (American Gods) and Justin Marks (Counterpart). Ticket link below.

Links:

  • Holiday Live Show tickets are available.
  • Godless on Netflix
  • The first 5 chapters of Arlo Finch in the Valley of Fire are online.
  • Hollywood studio real estate-related articles about Studio City, Century City, the history of the Disney Studio and CBS’ possible move to sell Television City.
  • Casablanca scene and script, with the scene starting on page 119.
  • Forgetting Sarah Marshall scene, pages, and script.
  • (500) Days of Summer scene, pages, and script.
  • Love and Basketball scene, pages, and script.
  • Brokeback Mountain scene, pages, and script.
  • Breakfast at Tiffany’s scene, pages, and script.
  • Merriam-Webster Time Traveler will show you the words that were added in any given year.
  • If you like that, you might like the Google n-gram viewer which graphs frequency of word use.
  • The Scriptnotes Listeners’ Guide!
  • The USB drives!
  • John August on Twitter
  • Craig Mazin on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Find past episodes
  • Outro by Arbitrary Jukebox (send us yours!)

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 11-29-17: The transcript of this episode can be found here

Austin 2017 Three Page Challenge

November 21, 2017 Challenge, Film Industry, Formatting, Scriptnotes, Television, Three Page Challenge, Transcribed, Words, Words on the page, Writing Process

John and Craig review four Three-Page Challenge entries with the help of Daniela Garcia-Brcek (Literary Manager at Circle of Confusion) and Cullen Conly (Literary Agent at ICM). We then invite the writers up to discuss the notes.

It’s not just craft, though. Our special guests give us a behind-the-scenes look at the realities of representation. What do agents and managers look for when they read (or “look at”) scripts? How important is a logline? Who reads queries? Daniela and Cullen tell us the unvarnished truth.

Thanks to the Austin Film Festival for hosting us and to our brave participants!

Links:

  • Tickets available for the Holiday Live Show now!
  • 2017 Austin Live Three Page Challenge — you can check out the pages here or on Weekend Read.
  • Want to submit a Three Page Challenge?
  • The Scriptnotes Listeners’ Guide!
  • The USB drives!
  • John August on Twitter
  • Craig Mazin on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Find past episodes
  • Outro by Matt Davis (send us yours!)

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 11-29-17: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

(Adjective) Soldier

November 14, 2017 Adaptation, Film Industry, Resources, Rights and Copyright, Scriptnotes, Transcribed, Web series, Writing Process

Craig and John open the overflowing listener mailbag to tackle questions on everything from montages to life rights to passive heroes. Plus, we have a definitive answer on whether to number minor characters. (Don’t.)

We also finally address a major controversy: Craig’s missing cover of “Killing the Blues” from Episode 109. It exists, and you can listen to it today.

The Scriptnotes 2017 Holiday Live Show will be December 7th in Hollywood. Mark your calendars! Tickets available soon.

Links:

  • Tickets available for the Holiday Live Show now!
  • Team America: World Police’s defense of “Montage”
  • NOLO’s Getting Permission: Using & Licensing Copyright-Protected Materials Online & Off, a handy legal guide for rights and rights purchases.
  • Cosmo Kramer, from Seinfeld, is based on Kenny Kramer, who sued a writer for defamation
  • James Bond and the Berne Convention
  • Trademark, Copyright, and a snazzy video on the difference between them from the USPTO.
  • The Copyright Term Extension Act, AKA the Sonny Bono Act, AKA the Mickey Mouse Protection Act.
  • Charles Dickens’ struggle with piracy in the US is illuminated in Fifty Inventions that Shaped the Modern World by Tim Harford.
  • Go’s character, Spider Marine, comes from John’s mishearing the Smashing Pumpkins lyric “despite all my rage.”
  • Craig’s cover of “Killing the Blues,” by Rowland Salley.
  • The South Park video game, South Park: The Fractured but Whole (a sequel to The Stick of Truth)
    *all possible trigger warnings apply
  • The Adelante Shoe Co. makes shoes for the discerning global citizen.
  • Next week’s episode is the 2017 Austin Live Three Page Challenge — you can check out the pages here or on Weekend Read.
  • Matthew Chilelli’s video about his definitely-not-haunted apartment in Japan
  • The Scriptnotes Listeners’ Guide!
  • The USB drives!
  • John August on Twitter
  • Craig Mazin on Twitter
  • John on Instagram
  • Find past episodes
  • Outro by Rowland Salley, performed by Craig Mazin (send us yours!)

Email us at ask@dev.johnaugust.com

You can download the episode here.

UPDATE 11-20-17: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

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