Education

I have an 11-and-a-half-year old who seems to watch movies
and TV shows more as a writer or director rather than as a viewer. She’ll second-guess
the plot,
for example; and also sometimes think that shots should be made in a certain
way. Do you have any suggestions for such a young aspiring filmmaker?

–Wordwitch

First off, kudos for recognizing her interest. By far the most helpful thing
a parent can do is to encourage their kids to explore what they like, and to
appreciate what they’re able to create. Her talent is like a tiny flame. It’s
your job to keep supplying the kindling she needs to burn, but avoid the temptation
to throw on too much too soon. You risk overwhelming her if she’s not ready
to move on to more sophisticated things.

If she has a favorite TV show, try taping an episode, then transcribing it
together. She’ll probably be fascinated to see what scenes look like when they’re
written down on paper. She may have ideas for her own scenes that are better
than the originals.

Likewise, you might help her find some fan fiction on the internet for her
favorite shows or movies. A lot of fan fiction is terribly written – and some
of it is very X-rated, so you’ll want to pre-screen – but if it inspires her
to write her own, fantastic.

If you happen to have a Mac and a DV video camera, iMovie is a no-brainer.
She can make little movies to her heart’s content, especially if you’re willing
to help when asked.

If she’s more interested in the design side of things, like costumes and sets,
try to get her involved with a children’s playhouse, or even a local community
theater. There are lots of jobs she could probably do, even at her age. Personal
bias, but I don’t think enough kids learn how to hammer or sew these days.

And keep in mind that her school district might have special drama or creative
writing programs. Ask her if she’d like to join one. Just remember: always
support, but never push. At some point, all kids rebel against their parents,
and if they associate you too strongly with the activity that gives them happiness,
there’s a chance they might walk away from it altogether.

I am 14 years-old and am very interested in screenwriting.
I have read numerous books on the subject. I have four questions:

1. At 14 years-old, what else should I be doing besides reading
   screenwriting books?

2. What screenwriting software do you use and why?
3. In your years of experience, do you find that your creative
   vision makes it to the big screen, without being altered too much?

4. How old were you when you wrote your first script? How old
   were you when your first script got purchased?

Thank you in advance for answering my questions.

–Adam

Usually I answer one or two questions per reader, but I remember when I was
fourteen I had a lot of questions, so I’ll make an exception.

First, at 14 years old you should be watching everything and everybody. I
don’t mean movies. Watch people, try to figure them out, try to listen to the
cadence and content of their speech. People are simply characters without a
plot. They’re your best place to start. And no one thinks a 14-year old is
paying attention, so they’re likely to let you watch and listen.

And of course you should write. But I wouldn’t get too hung up on writing
a whole screenplay just yet. Write snippets. Write stories. Just write whatever
you feel like.

Second, I use Final Draft for the Macintosh. I love it, but there are other
good programs. And remember, a tool is only as good as the person using it.

Third, a screenwriter’s creative vision often does suffer on the way to the
screen. A screenplay is a blueprint, and the actual movie that gets constructed
may not live up to your highest hopes. I was thrilled with GO, but then I also
produced, so I had a pretty big hand in how it would be done. Other projects
haven’t always met my expectations, and it’s usually because choices were made
that I wouldn’t have made. That’s the reality when you’re not the final voice
on a movie.

Fourth, I was 22 when I wrote my first script. I wrote it in film school,
and it was overwritten like most first scripts are. It’s never been produced,
and honestly it never should be. But it got me started. The first script I
was paid to write was HOW TO EAT FRIED WORMS, which is just now making it to
the gate. The first original script I sold was GO.

When I look back to stuff I wrote when I was 14, I’m usually impressed by
the vocabulary and horrified by the subject matter. I wrote about the stupidest
things, most of them related to Dungeons & Dragons. But it’s important
that I wrote those early things, because it gave me the confidence to make
a living at it now.

What’s the first movie where the writing really made an impression on you?

–Kate

I remember watching WAR OF THE ROSES on videotape with my brother, and liking
it so much that I immediately rewound it and started watching it again. I wrote
down the dialogue for the first few scenes,
and suddenly realized that somebody really had to write this all first — the
actors weren’t just making their
lines up. There was an invisible plan behind the movie I was watching.

That seems strange to me now, because at the time I’d read plays and even
acted in a few. But plays are basically just dialogue, while a movie script
had to show what was happening even when no characters were talking. I wouldn’t
read an actual movie script until a few years later, but it didn’t stop me
from transcribing an entire episode of "Star Trek: The Next Generation." (Incidentally,
transcribing a show is a great exercise to get comfortable with standard formatting
and writing scene description, since the big work — structure, character,
dialogue and plot — are already handled for you.)

When someone says about a movie that "the writing was really impressive," I
always wonder if that means that some other aspect of the movie wasn’t very
good, such as the acting or the directing, which let you notice the words.
In my experience, if everything in is working at top form, you’re not even
aware the movie is written. It seems to simply exist.

It’s only as you stop to think back about what you saw that you recognize
how good the writing must have been. Experience has shown that you can make
a bad movie from a great script, but you can’t make a great movie from a bad
script.