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Whiplash, on paper and on screen

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November 17, 2015 Directors, Follow Up, Formatting, Scriptnotes, Transcribed, Words on the page

John and Craig take an in-depth look at two scenes in Damien Chazelle’s WHIPLASH to see how conflicts were structured — and what changed from script to shooting.

In follow-up, we discuss the myth vs. reality of Zola, and what we mean by a character having agency.

We’re having a live holiday show in Los Angeles! It’s December 9th in Hollywood, with special guests Riki Lindhome, Natasha Leggero and Malcolm Spellman. Tickets will sell out, so be sure to click the links below.

Links:

  • Buy your tickets now for the 2015 Scriptnotes Holiday Show on December 9th with guests Riki Lindhome, Natasha Leggero and Malcolm Spellman
  • The true story behind ‘Zola,’ the epic Twitter story too crazy to be real
  • Whiplash on Wikipedia
  • Whiplash, family dinner scene, and the PDF
  • Whiplash, jazz club scene, Script vs Screen, and the PDF
  • Sunnybrook doctor first to perform blood-brain barrier procedure using focused ultrasound waves
  • what3words
  • Outro by Kim Atle (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 11-20-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Confusing, Unlikable and On-The-Nose

November 10, 2015 Adaptation, Follow Up, Scriptnotes, Transcribed

John and Craig look at some of the least helpful notes screenwriters receive, and strategies for dealing with them.

Then it’s a look at novelists who adapt their own books into screenplays, and the pros and cons involved.

In the premium feed over at scriptnotes.net, you’ll find two bonus episodes: the live Three Page Challenge from Austin 2015, and my interview with The Martian screenwriter Drew Goddard for the Writers Guild Foundation.

Links:

  • The Austin Film Festival
  • Sign up for a premium subscription at scriptnotes.net for access to bonus episodes, like this week’s 2015 Austin Three Page Challenge and John’s interview with Drew Goddard
  • Man Up on Wikipedia and Apple Trailers, and writer Tess Morris on IMDb and Twitter
  • 2015 Nicholl Screenwriting Awards: Andrew Friedhof on YouTube
  • Follow John’s progress on his NaNoWriMo profile
  • Los Angeles Times on Melissa Mathison
  • Against Subtlety from Slate
  • Herman Melville’s Bartleby, the Scrivener on Project Gutenberg, and the interactive, annotated version from Slate
  • The Room Three from Fireproof Games
  • Outro by Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 11-13-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Live from Austin 2015

November 3, 2015 Film Industry, Follow Up, News, QandA, Scriptnotes, Transcribed, Travel

Craig and John return to the Austin Film Festival for a supersize live show with guests Nicole Perlman and Steve Zissis.

We talk with Nicole about what’s changed in her life after the breakout success of Guardians of the Galaxy, and how she juggles multiple projects.

Steve Zissis tells us how he transitioned from waiter to co-creator of HBO’s Togetherness, and the unusual origin of the show.

Then all four of us play How Would This Be a Movie, looking at #Zola’s adventure, the runaway blimp and the lonely death of George Bell.

Plus audience questions!

Our thanks to the Austin Film Festival for hosting us, and our terrific audience.

  • The Austin Film Festival
  • The Monty Hall problem on Wikipedia
  • Nicole Perlman on IMDb and Twitter, and on Scriptnotes, 164
  • Steve Zissis on IMDb and Twitter
  • Togetherness on HBO and Wikipedia
  • Papermag on The Harrowing Twitter Odyssey of @_zolarmoon
  • The Baltimore Sun on the rogue JLENS blimp
  • The Lonely Death of George Bell, from The New York Times
  • Variety on Nicole Perlman and Challenger
  • Marty on Wikipedia
  • Glif tripod phone mount
  • Cosmonauts: Birth of the Space Age at the London Science Museum
  • The Man Who Planted Trees, on Wikipedia and Netflix DVD
  • Thync
  • Intro/Outro by Matthew Chilelli (send us yours!)

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 11-6-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

Nobody Knows Anything (including what this quote means)

October 27, 2015 Film Industry, Follow Up, Psych 101, Scriptnotes, So-Called Experts, Transcribed, Writing Process

Craig and John get to the bottom of William Goldman’s famous quotation about Hollywood, which is so often misapplied. Then it’s a discussion of zombie cars, wind-tunnels, blockbusters, and the paradox of choice.

Finally, we look at the intersection of luck and talent behind a screenwriter’s career, and why struggle isn’t a useful yardstick for much of anything.

Links:

  • Austin Film Festival 2015 panel schedule
  • Karina Longworth’s You Must Remember This
  • Scriptnotes, 220: Writers Rooms, Taxes, and Fat Hamlet
  • William Goldman on Wikipedia, and Adventures in the Screen Trade on Amazon
  • The Zombie-mobile
  • Least objectionable program on Wikipedia
  • The Paradox of Choice: Why More Is Less by Barry Schwartz
  • The Selling Your Screenplay Podcast, episode 95
  • Tessy and Tab
  • BuzzFeed Crosswords, and logic-puzzles.org
  • Pokémon’s Creepy Lavender Town Myth, Explained on Kotaku

You can download the episode here: AAC | mp3.

UPDATE 10-28-15: The transcript of this episode can be found here.

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